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I dont get the thought away(ssry for bad eng^^) that the Dragon God must jump in the Volkano or something like that, after he had/has 1 child (or something like that).
What r u thinking??


PS Chap 26 : THE WAR BEGINNS^^

dont be naive, they always lure them in with beautiful maidens before they toss the virgin into the volcano

In the end it turns out that he was a ghost. Or it turns out that the girls were just his other personality that he imagined. Or it turns out that the girls were just monsters from the woods in disguise.

The dragon god tells obaa that his words are the law, and decides to take all three maidens to live (or sleep?) happily after.

He will choose one and the other two are heart broken. That is obvious.

No no no... everyone listen to my theory. it is quite elaborate, since i spent last night dreaming all about it. lol

So... the guy (god of dragon, or whatever. lol) impregnates all three girls and has to live with them in his house, now turned harem. The island has to comply to Nagi living with three concubines. Or marry only one of them, despite having kids with all three. Or, the island elders decide that even if all three girls bear children for dragon punk (lol) he will still have to marry one of them, so i guess in this case it will be Shizuku. Furthering on this theory, if Nagi can't choose which of the 3 young mothers to marry, it becomes evident when only Shizuku bears him a boy (who for some reason is better for the dragon punk lineage). the other two having girls. so, he marries Shizuku again anyway lol...

anyways, that's my theory to step up on the ecchiness. this island and ecchi setting is fun to think of. it really makes you wonder where the story will go, though it doesn't really have much to tell. the story will have to change in the next 10 chapters at least, to keep up the interest of readers... it would be very disappointing if all the story does is lead each girl, one at a time in usual dating order (karin, soyogi, shizuku) to each try their luck by stepping up on their love game. the first round was getting to know Nagi, and the second round was to kiss, and Karin is completing this part probably next chapter. after that what happens?? no idea. something intelligent and complex has to happen! otherwise it'll just become boring.

sharks wrote:No no no... everyone listen to my theory. it is quite elaborate, since i spent last night dreaming all about it. lol

So... the guy (god of dragon, or whatever. lol) impregnates all three girls and has to live with them in his house, now turned harem. The island has to comply to Nagi living with three concubines. Or marry only one of them, despite having kids with all three. Or, the island elders decide that even if all three girls bear children for dragon punk (lol) he will still have to marry one of them, so i guess in this case it will be Shizuku. Furthering on this theory, if Nagi can't choose which of the 3 young mothers to marry, it becomes evident when only Shizuku bears him a boy (who for some reason is better for the dragon punk lineage). the other two having girls. so, he marries Shizuku again anyway lol...

anyways, that's my theory to step up on the ecchiness. this island and ecchi setting is fun to think of. it really makes you wonder where the story will go, though it doesn't really have much to tell. the story will have to change in the next 10 chapters at least, to keep up the interest of readers... it would be very disappointing if all the story does is lead each girl, one at a time in usual dating order (karin, soyogi, shizuku) to each try their luck by stepping up on their love game. the first round was getting to know Nagi, and the second round was to kiss, and Karin is completing this part probably next chapter. after that what happens?? no idea. something intelligent and complex has to happen! otherwise it'll just become boring.

Sure, but they change the order. This time Karin goes last.

I smell conspiracy.... *sniff sniff*

I'm smelling expository chapters (delve into Nagi's background, such as it is for a teenager)....and, if Ai Yori Ao Shi was any indicator of style, I'm hoping for a little more ecchi. I don't want Nagi to choose any time soon....too much fun to be had in stringing things along.

Presently, we're shaping up to a nice harem story---heck, even Soyogi's warming to Nagi, and she was the one that threw him into a hammer-lock as an introduction (of sorts)! As quickly as this is moving along, it makes me wonder a little if Fumiziki-sensei is either running a little short on plot-ideas, or is trying too hard to make it different from AI Yori Ao Shi (which might yield the same thing).

Let's not forget about Shizuku and Nagi's childhood romance! We all know it's coming.

ah, you mean when Nagi first met Shizuku, she said that there is a boy that goes to Tokyo. But although it is possible that that is Nagi, there is still possibilities that it's others, and this other guy may as well grab Shizuku attention, or attempt to. I don't have much reference concerning Fumiziki sensei's works but that is a possible plot.

Im new but I would like to share my own ideas on this subject. I have read this manga for some time now and have come up with a good idea. If you remember when Rinne first meet Nagi she was shocked. Well lets continue with that. Rinne maybe the maiden of time/past/somthing of those lines. She knows way too much to be only karins younger sister. I think this manga may go supernatural before it ends. As such this is what I think may happen.

' = Words spoken
" = thoughts/ideas
* = actions

*Nagi thrashing in bed*
*Crimson eyes stare at him as he sinks into dark waters*
Nagi - Baaa~ *Grabs his head* 'dam the third night with the same dream'
Nagi - "I need some fresh air, just hope I did't wake up anyone."
Nagi - *climbs out of bed and walks to the roof*
Nagi - 'Ahhh that feels good. Man I sweat a lot tonight with that strange dream'
Nagi - *Looks up to the moon* *shocked by what he sees he stumbs back*
Nagi - 'a A crimson moon?!? Thats all I need after my dream.'

Bum Bum Bum Bum

Nagi - 'Whos there?'
Nagi - *Grabs chest*
Nagi - "what my heart?!?" "Feels like its on fire!"
Nagi - *falls to the ground*

Shows Nagi laying on the roof in a soft red glow of the crimson moon.

Karin - *Yawn* 'Oh Nagi wake up sleepy head'
Karin - *opens door to nagi's room and looks around*
Karin - "maybe hes in the shower" *Evil smirk*
Karin - *opens the door to the bathroom sneaks to the shower and opens*
Karin - 'Ahh ha!?!' 'Nagi???' "Where is he?"
Karin - *saw soyogi joging up to the house*
Karin - 'Hay Soyogi have you seen Nagi?'

Soyogi - 'I have not seen the dragon god this morning, and I didnt wish to disturb him so I ran alone this morning'

Shizuku - *Yawn, stagger past the two girls into the bathroom*

Soyogi - 'And there seems to be no point in asking Shizuku by the looks of it'

Karin - 'Im going to go over and ask Rinne and Obaa if they have seen Nagi.'

Soyogi - 'I will acompany you. I was worried that the Dragon God may not be feeling well when he failed to show for our morning run.'

Karin - *???* "So thats it eh. Soyogi is smother with Nagi than I thought."
Karin - 'So you both get up so early in the morning to run???'

Soyogi - *Cold sweat* 'Yes he is able to keep up with me lately too...'

Karin, Soyogi - *walks over and sees Obaa leaving the house*

Karin - 'Obaa have you seen Nagi? He wasnt in his room when we got up this morning."

Obaa - 'No I have not. But theres another problem as well. Rinne is no where to be found!'

Will continue if anyone wants me to.... I have a lot more that just that. Only a taist for now.

Mangaka should recruit you guys and replace the ones he has now.

Chapter 2 :Lost God!:

*Drip... Drip.... Drip..."

Nagi - 'Uhh..' *Opens his eyes to a damp cave*
Nagi - 'Where am I?'

God - 'You are where I sleep!'

Nagi - 'Gahh what, who’s there!'

God - 'Do not be afraid, for you are me and I am you!'

Nagi - 'What do you mean? I don’t understand you.'

God - 'Very well I shall start from the beginning.'
God - 'I am a celestial being that came to this planet long before life walked upon in. It was a ball of hot magma spinning in space when I first saw it. I thought it would be a good place to take a long awaited rest.'
God - 'When I first awoke I noticed a change happened when I slept. Where there was only magma now waters flowed and land had taken shape. Also the most astounding thing was the creatures upon it.'
God - 'I slept and awoke many times and each new time things changed. New life flourished upon this once lifeless world. Also a new life had taken root as well. MAN!'
God - 'I could no longer move my body anymore, for if I did I would destroy far too much on your world. So instead I used my very spirit to look around your world each time I awoke.'
God - 'However this was not the best method of finding out what I had missed when I slept. So I took over the body of one of the now many people of this world.'
God - 'from that joining I learned much that human. However I also felt what it is to feel pain sorrow and fear. These where new concepts even to me.'
God - 'Each time I awoke I took another human. It was like a drug to me. The thoughts the feelings that each conveyed to my mind. However one thing was wrong.'
God - 'I had lost what something of my spirit each time I took another humans body as my own. I had to stop before I had lost my own soul, my own way.'
God - 'I was saved by the very people I had thought where destroying my soul each time I took one of them. I was saved threw love.'
God - 'It was one emotion I had never felt in all the time I lived among this world. And I used the last host my last avatar among your people to make my first children.'
God – ‘And with the love I had gained along with the children I forged a new path for myself and the people of the Island I had fallen in love with.’
God – ‘Now Nagi I shall look again upon this world threw your eyes and feel the love I long for threw the maidens of this Island.’

Nagi – ‘You wish to take over my body!?!’

Yes I shrank this chapter down from what it was to the god talking about his past. Just wanted to get to that part quickly. In the one I wrote it had Nagi looking around the cave and the God opening his red eye to look at his new avatar. But I thought it would be best to just get to the story of the god past quickly.